Friday, May 19, 2006

360. 55 Fiction Friday: A Date with Douglas

A Date with Douglas

4/25/06 Chico

The exchange happened quickly much to Janelle's relief. It didn't bother her that the Engineer returned her Business Website dehydrated, wrinkled and minus a finger. After all, she had a date with Douglas.

When she returned home, her bath was running. Douglas was floating lifelessly on his side!

It was time to call the police.




crime scene?

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7 comments:

Unknown said...

McMeatie (I still can't get over that name!): You aren't telling me that is what killed him, are you?

And the poor thing never lived to see me naked. Poor him... poor me!

tinyhands said...

sensual bath something... delish.

Unknown said...

TinyHands: Whatever floats your rubber ducky.

Neel Mehta said...

Technically, that's 2055 words.

Unknown said...

Neel: *sigh* You caught me.

Willie Baronet said...

First of all, I am such a big fan of the bath. But seeing Douglas's lifeless body has spoiled the thought of hot running water forever. The pain...

Unknown said...

Willie: Buck up, little camper. Douglas is a hired actor!